be more punchy
its a journey and its showing your creative process, so the presentation should have a rhythm and Flow to it
don't overtalk the slides
pictures of the research sheets need to be bigger- showing the important bits
being involved in people's lives could be a start of the description
more visuals
show pics up bigger
show the buildings linked to the travelling and the pattern
show the pattern in real life situations - the products
show someone surrounded in pattern
show place I want to work
show the connection to life and pattern and the travelling
show emotion- passion
someone opening a present with patterned wrapping paper etc
show the designers faces and workspaces
visualise yourself in a workspace/place/studio
from this feedback, the main idea of which I think I can develop on, is the displaying of pattern in real life situations, showing set ups with pattern surrounding someone, really communicating the vision of my work being in peoples lives. Also, the presentation needs tweaks such as becoming more visual, showing the pictures bigger and not having bullet points.
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